Looks awesome!!
Really now, it's really cool!

Only thing I'd change would be to put the man in color too, like the water, but it still looks perfect just as it is

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thank you very much Dark F0x

yeah, i had a bit of a trouble finding a male i liked but this suited my theme well but it was bw. I tried adding some color to him but it looked very fake so i preferred to leave it as it was

I`m glad you liked it

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Ah I see
It's okay, it still looks awesome
And you're welcome

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I agree that maybe a coloured man would look a little better, but I understand how hard it can be to find a picture that will work just right!
Just one little thing, is that I think his head, and bottom of his arms (behind the glass) maybe could be a little lighter. I see a lighter line at the top of the glass, but then it seems to be just as dark as the rest of his body...Maybe my eyes are decieving me and it is lighter (I just woke up...), or maybe it doesn't need that at all... I don't know. I was just thinking of what somehthing looks like behind glass...But I'm just an amateur. lmao.

I really like this though... and when I first saw it I didn't see anything really that needed to be changed...I just looked closer b/c you requested a critique...but this isn't really a critique...more of my opinion...

I think I am just babbling now.

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Well, see, the thing is, I did that a bit lighter but i think i stopped too early. if you`ll download it and zoom in you`ll see it`s a little little bit lighter. I stopped cause when i rolled the brush again it looked too much so i went for this subtle look

look, i submitted this to my scraps [link] . Which one looks better ?

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Well that's good then.
Subtle look is good...but I voted on your poll as well... I do like the one in your scraps better. Though both of them are very creative and well done.


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well, really, thank you very much for your appreciation

btw, i noticed you draw very nice are you in the mood for a request ?

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Great

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hey that's great

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